Wednesday, 17 April 2013

Argument Over World's Smallest Park

Britain and America are arguing of who has the worlds smallest park. One in Portland and its 0.6 meters long The Guinness Book Of World Records says the park is the smallest. One in England theirs is 4.5 meters long and they think that portlans park isn't a park at all. This is England's world smallest park. This is Portland's world smallest park. My opinion is that I don't think these parks aren't parks at all.

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    Comment: I think that you could fix up some grammar and in some places make it make sense. But other than that you have a good blog with labels & titles on everything.

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